the expenditure on fast food by income groups UK 1990

Essay topics:

the expenditure on fast food by income groups, UK 1990.

The bar chart indicates how much three income groups spent on three types of fast food in the UK in 1990.
Overall, It is obvious that the expenditure on each type of fast food was different in each income group. Another interesting point is that the low income group spent the least money on fast food.
People in the high income group spent the most money. In particularly, hamburger accounted for about 42 pence per week, which was over double the money spending on fish and chips, and 17 pence per week spent on pizza. If we look at the average income group, hamburger also saw a higher amount of budget the consumers spent on than the other types, at 32 pence per week, compared with 25 pence per week on fish and chips and 12 pence per week on pizza.
Regarding the low income group, people spent more money on fish and chips than on hamburger and only 7 pence per week per on pizza.

Votes
Average: 5.2 (8 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37951807229 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10196080409 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518072289157 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9171700341 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203506350591 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1330876165 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115811390702 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174172698269 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135185451141 0.0819641961636 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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