Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible.
To what extent do you agree with this?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Agriculture is the backbone for a economy for numerous countries. Special privileges are provided to farmers for their contribution to the economy. Numerous points and have been illustrated to support such actions by the government.
Firstly, a farmer invests his money, time and efforts to gain profit. Moreover their contribution towards the society helps in the development of economy and the population as well. Furthermore special tax rebates are available to such farming community to encourage the growth of certain products that are greatly in demand. In addition loans that were procured by such farmers were nullified as a reward. For instance, last month Indian government had reduced the rate of interest for the farmers.
Secondly, in order to encourage the preference of produced produced in the country additional tax is levied on imported goods. Not only will it boost the sales of locally made items but also keep the foreign companies flooding the local market with their goods at bay. People prefer imported goods to that which is locally produced, because of the quality . Government should take initiatives to change people's perception. For example, Bali is one such location where foreign goods are in greater demand to local goods. Though the economy would receive money through imports and sales tax, the local community have been deprived from their livelihood.
To put it in a nutshell, it is upto the government and the people who live there to give preference to local produce rather than imported goods. This will be helpful for the economy as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
Agriculture is the backbone for a economy for numerous countries. Special...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...money, time and efforts to gain profit. Moreover their contribution towards the society ...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
... of economy and the population as well. Furthermore special tax rebates are available to su...
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Suggestion: addition,
...products that are greatly in demand. In addition loans that were procured by such farmer...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: produced
...in order to encourage the preference of produced produced in the country additional tax is levied...
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Suggestion: .
...locally produced, because of the quality . Government should take initiatives to c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill be helpful for the economy as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19921875 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65052813585 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4877024389 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1875 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156946477311 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524184202338 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294242658266 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989092292205 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00775121172878 0.0819641961636 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 40.7170731707 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.