Favourite school subject for boys in school

Essay topics:

Favourite school subject for boys in school

The pie chart depicts an information about the percentages of some subjects for boys they prefer at school.
Overall, the chart shows several topics including physical education, science, mathematics, technology, English, geography, history and the other one.
To be specific, the highest percentage is on physical education 30%, which meant that is the most wanted one from other topics. Both history and the other one are 2%, these figures being the lowest options on this graph. The percentage on science plunged by 5% (from 30% physical education and 25% science). 18 percent of male students decide on mathematics, whereas just 10 percent of male students settle on technology for their best-loved lesson. Additionally, the rest of two English and geography dropped 22% and 25% from physical education. On the other hand, English and geography was almost as low as history and the other one.
In conclusion, physically lessons are the highest preferred subject for their education. In spite of history and the other one, the rests are in fluctuation.

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Average: 8.5 (17 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, in conclusion, in spite of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25443786982 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76805467364 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609467455621 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3749876847 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.8 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117922753932 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501429909188 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101368617985 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111899727182 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131222504299 0.0819641961636 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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