The figure below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the main information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates the number of incarcerations in the countries of Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, Unites States and Canada from 1930 to 1980.
Overall, it can be seen that, despite some fluctuations, over the period as a whole, the proportion remained high in the U.S and Canada. However, for Britain it remained the lowest, while there wasn’t much of a change for the remaining countries.
At the beginning of the time frame, both the U.S and Canada faced the highest number of cases as compared to the rest of the countries. Canada, however, had the most cases of imprisonment, accounting for a total of 120 thousand prisoners. After that, it saw a gradual decline over the upcoming years, hitting a low of just below 100 thousand at the end of the period. In contrast, the rate in the U.S, during 1930, was 20 thousand less than Canada, however, it jumped up the following year and exceeded the figure in that of Canada. Finally, in 1980, a drastic increase in the rate was noticed, ending the period with a little above 140 thousand prisoners, which was the highest for that year.
On the other hand, Britain started the period with the least number of prisoners; nevertheless, it followed a stable and gradually rising trend throughout the years, landing at around 80 thousand people in jail in 1980. The other two countries, despite some ups and downs throughout, did not end up in a much altered state.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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..., the proportion remained high in the U.S and Canada. However, for Britain it rem...
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...beginning of the time frame, both the U.S and Canada faced the highest number of ...
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... period. In contrast, the rate in the U.S, during 1930, was 20 thousand less than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, nevertheless, so, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83805668016 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67405765458 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566801619433 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3880218042 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11900643471 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466585063793 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027894426521 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665772401491 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226678898728 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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