The figure provides information regarding the electricity production accounting for five phases in a geothermal power plant First the cold water moves to the underground through the injection well pumping a hefty 4 5 km Then on the rout of reaching to the

Essay topics:

The figure provides information regarding the electricity production accounting for five phases in a geothermal power plant.

First, the cold water moves to the underground through the injection well, pumping a hefty 4.5 km. Then, on the rout of reaching to the production well, it is heated by the hot rocks in the geothermal zone. After that, to complete the cycle, hot water goes up in the production well to reach to a container, naming the condenser on the surface of the earth. Furthermore, after the phase 4, the high congestion water stem is poured to another container called the phase 5 as a last step. In phase 5, the turbine is powered by steam followed by producing electricity by means of a generator in a container distributing the energy for use.

To sum up, in a geothermal power plant, the cold water is changed to the steam through the hot rocks underground, and then the steam powered the turbine to help generate electricity by a generator.

The figure provides information regarding the electricity production accounting for five phases in a geothermal power plant.

First, the cold water moves to the underground through the injection well, pumping a hefty 4.5 km. Then, on the rout of reaching to the production well, it is heated by the hot rocks in the geothermal zone. After that, to complete the cycle, hot water goes up in the production well to reach to a container, naming the condenser on the surface of the earth. Furthermore, after the phase 4, the high congestion water stem is poured to another container called the phase 5 as a last step. In phase 5, the turbine is powered by steam followed by producing electricity by means of a generator in a container distributing the energy for use.

To sum up, in a geothermal power plant, the cold water is changed to the steam through the hot rocks underground, and then the steam powered the turbine to help generate electricity by a generator.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, regarding, then, well, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80838323353 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86778214055 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532934131737 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6567567543 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.600413753315 0.215688989381 278% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.265281032311 0.103423049105 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181777012029 0.0843802449381 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.407990705343 0.15604864568 261% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131298120833 0.0819641961636 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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