The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use

Essay topics:

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The graphs underneath illustrate the energy consumptions by different household work and greenhouse gas released as a consequence of using them in Australia.

Overall, each activity mention except heating emits more greenhouse gas than they consume energy. Cooling representing the lowest share in both segments whereas, heating used maximum power and water heating released the highest greenhouse gas.

Detailing energy usage graph, heating ranked first with power usage of 42%, water heating at second place utilized 30% of total energy. With energy consumption of 15% other appliances stood at third position. Rest other household works energy consumption falls under 10%.

Visualizing greenhouse emission, although heating consumed the highest energy but water heating and other appliances overtook it in terms of greenhouse emission by releasing 32% and 28% of gas while greenhouse emission by heating was less than half (15%) than its energy usage. On the other hand, air contamination by lighting and refrigeration was double their power utilization. Cooling remained at bottom of both graphs with energy usage of 2% and carbon emission of 3%.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, third, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61714285714 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74781694426 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594285714286 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.7252464429 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.222222222 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203493449942 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912295696812 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534682922831 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140740825941 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381201715605 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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