The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use

Essay topics:

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first pie chart compares the amount of energy was used by people in Australia in various fields and the second one illustrates the greenhouse gas emissions released by this energy use.

It can be seen that households in Australia used the most energy for heating and least for cooling. However, water heating was the main sector that had an immense influence on gas emissions.

According to the first pie chart, Australian households had a big demand for heating which consumed the largest amount of energy, up to 42% whereas, energy consumption from cooling, lighting, and refrigeration was marginally lower, at 2%, 4%, and 7% respectively. By contrast, 30% of the energy was spent on water heating, which was twice as much as that on other appliances.

Looking at the second chart in more detail, although the most energy was used for heating, it only resulted in 15% of the total emission. On the other hand, water heating took responsibility for releasing the largest amount of greenhouse gas emission accounted for over 30%. There was 28% of the energy consumed by other appliances, while the figure for refrigeration represented half of that. The amount of energy used for cooling and lighting purposes was quite negligible.

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Average: 8.7 (28 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, second, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06829268293 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77443071533 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546341463415 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0502738084 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.444444444 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319343849292 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144675926529 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104176106974 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22738493606 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101642565227 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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