The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compa

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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate the usage of energy in an average household in Australia and greenhouse gas emissions due to this energy use.

Overall, it can be seen that heating accounts highest among other household energy usage while cooling consumes the lowest rate of the total energy. On the other hand, water heating is the largest contributing factor of greenhouse gas emissions but the percentage of gas emissions due to cooling is the smallest.

A close look at the first chart reveals that Australian citizens use heating most which contributes 42% of the total energy. Water energy absorbs 30% of the total energy consumed by households in Australia. Energy utilizes for refrigeration, lighting, and cooling are 7%, 4% and 2 % correspondingly. Energy uses for other appliances is half of the energy utilizes by water heating.

Heating causes 15% greenhouse gas emissions but water heating is the reason for 32% greenhouse gas discharge. The percentage of greenhouse gas discharges by cooling, lighting, and refrigeration are 3%, 8%, and 14% respectively. Other appliances are a contributing factor of 28% gas emissions. So it is clear that cooling, lighting, refrigeration, and other appliances result in a significant proportion of hazardous gas release.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38693467337 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12889756943 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517587939698 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7454767726 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4545454545 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292572042965 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123383361041 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101274151264 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217356345421 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124464079689 0.0819641961636 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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