Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent to you agree or disagree.
It is irrefutable that education plays an imperative role in building the successful career of a person. There are numerous fields of education and every trade has indispensable impact to construct a prosperous society. importance of arts subjects has their own influence in society. Whereas, practical degrees like Engineering, Science etc have higher demand for well-being of our society as well as the employment rate in these sectors are strikingly high. But everyone does not have same mental capacity to absorb Science or Engineering. So they should be induced to major on arts subjects according to their desire. In my perspective, both science and arts subjects play a crucial role to build well round society and thus both are required.
Nowadays, more people tend to pursue courses that can give practical knowledges. These courses have higher demand because the range of salary offered by these courses are comparatively higher than other courses. These courses acquire scientific knowledge and mathematics and experimented with to develop ways that benefit mankind, making it extremely important to society for innumerable reasons. As per as Engineering is concerned, according to a recent statistic, 70% of the Engineering graduates secured job that can ensure a bright future. But we should never forget that success comes with price.The amount of money is required to pursue these streams are really high. They will groom you with highly skilled faculties in return of high course fees. many people can not afford the course fee that is a main reason that students go for arts subjects.
On the other hand, the influence that arts subjects such as philosophy, history etc have in society is paramount. Philosophy is associated with wisdom,intellectual culture and a search for knowledge. A broad and imperial conception of philosophy finds a reasoned enquiry into such matters as reality, morality in life. In addition, history helps you to understand the past to predict the future and help in creating it. History assists to gain profound knowledge about vicissitude of human life over the decades. But it is really true that employment rate in these sectors is really less. Increasing university fee and scarce employment really makes people think twice before taking these subjects as their career, Government should broaden work prospectives of these fields and people should be propelled to choose these subjects because to build a beautiful society every trade is important.
To recapitulate, I personally think that people should be encouraged to choice their career on the basis of their interest not on the basis of salary that will be provided or the scope of that subject. I suggest that every student should have command in philosophy, history or other arts subjects even if they elect to major in the sciences because learning critical thinking skills and developing a wide background knowledge will benefit them enormously in their future life. Also, we need specialist graduates in arts subjects to make their contribution to a well-rounded society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, thus, well, whereas, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2599.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 491.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2932790224 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84583994033 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513238289206 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 816.3 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8416312723 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.291666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4583333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19753025779 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050753251219 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463513973433 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114467776308 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324162735466 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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