Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result i a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Freedom is a state of mind and it is the birthright of every individual. Children are not exception of this. So many people think that giving the authority to choose everyday matters can make children self-centered only. But some people argue that giving the right of making their own decisions can enhance the confidence of a child, thus they can be able to make choices about the things that matters to them. As both viewpoints have merits, I think children should be definitely given the privilege to take their own decisions but they should also be aware to the effects of their decisions.
Every individual have their own perspective to live their life. Youngsters are full of energy as well their ideas are dynamic and the way they look at life at young age is totally divergent. It is stated that small decisions can make huge changes. Parents should propel their child to take their own decisions about small things like food, clothes and entertainment. It will support them to look at life in a different way from an early age which will help them to become an independent person who can easily resolve any situation without taking other's support. So parent should persuade the youth to take risk of making decisions but also teach them the consequences of their decisions so the children not only get an idea but also conscious of the after effects of their choices.
On the other hand, blind faith is not something one should persist. Sometimes parents are oblivious about the decisions made by their little one. Parents will love their children is natural but love without rebuff can make the child spoil. Some parents provide their child with everything they want. As a result, the child become self-obsessed. There are so many incidents can be observed where children abandoned or even murdered their parents because they did not get what they wanted.
To recapitulate, I think children should be given every right to make their decisions but it is the parents who should monitor and explain the outcomes of the decisions taken by their little one. It is their responsibility to raise their baby in such a way that they can become a strong independent personality rather than becoming a self-absorbed person who can bring no good to the society as well as the family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t. It will support them to look at life in a different way from an early age which will help them ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, well, i think, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8443877551 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56119272889 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47193877551 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3243951494 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9473684211 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299672631115 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10075984911 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717690470149 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19510215214 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520219587872 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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