Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisons about matters that affect them.
Children represents the future of society. While some say that letting children to make decisions on matters like food, clothes and entertainment is likely to make them self-centered, it is still a contentious matter. Proponents argue that children should be allowed to make choices on matters that affect them. Despite it makes them self-serving, it will foster child's development as a whole.
One who only thinks about own wishes or desires is often regarded as an egoistic person. Children with this behaviour will likely to experience difficulties to cope up in the society. Lets take an example of child's school, the first thing taught to him is the capability of sharing things and understanding emotional situations of others. Self-centered children will never inculcate this ability and thus would not be accepted by other children in school. Not only this, they will not be able to feel the emotional situations of their families as they will lack the skill of attachment and hence would end up being alone their whole life.
However, allowing children to build their own choices will help them to acquire the ability of decision making. Firstly it will hasten the process of brain development. This in turn will improve their IQ levels. Secondly, it will make them independent which is worthwhile to survive in today's world. By not depending on their guardians for anything they will adapt more quickly to different situations. To illustrate, only because I was allowed to make my own decisions since I was a child I survived in hostel when i had to go out of the city for higher studies as I already knew the meaning of being independent. Children with this skill will know the consequences of bad or good choices made by them hence they would not blame anybody for it in future which is a good achievement in itself.
To reciprocate, although permitting children to make their own choices leave them self-centered, it has other benefits towards child's growth in the long run. In my opinion, children should be encouraged to make decisions as to evolve their brain functions so that they succeed as an individual in today's world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97777777778 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79714912185 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522222222222 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2099307452 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250501025353 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846888716729 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653721115886 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168787446885 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337781724645 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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