The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparis

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The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

There are two charts that represent the activities of Australian dwellings on energy spend. The fist chart shows how they waste their energy and second represents the share of percentage number of releasing greenhouse gasses from the average energy use. In general, the greenhouse gas emissions slightly emit a number of emissions not far from energy waste but is does not occur on refrigeration, heating, and other appliances.
The number of three energy spends, water heating, cooling, and lighting, similarly paralleled to what greenhouse gas release. The regular energy use emits slightly the same amount. 30% energy spend emits 32%, 2% to 2%, and 4% to 8% respectively.
The number of high gap release occurs on the rest of energy waste, refrigeration, heating, and other appliances. The number of gas emissions is twice than normal energy waste. 7% refrigeration launch 14% of gasses, 15% other appliances emit 28% greenhouse gas, lastly, Heating decrease in double number from 42% of usage to 15% of emissions.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, lastly, second, similarly, well, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23170731707 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81952696426 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3582497512 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300996175571 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136782408549 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892036607903 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213352818439 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111629929516 0.0819641961636 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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