The first graph below shows the weight (in tonnes) of fruit produced by a farm during each month in
2013, and also the amount (in tonnes) of fertiliser used. The second graph shows the volume of
rainfall in each month (in millimetres.)
Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
The charts give information regarding the tonnage of fruit produced in a farm per month in
2013, the fertiliser used and the monthly rainfall in that year.
We can see that fruit production rose steadily from just over 2 tonnes in January to a peak of
roughly 4.2 tonnes by August. Output then fell rapidly, declining to around the initial 2 tonne mark in
December. However, looking at fertiliser use, we see that this seasonal pattern is largely reversed:
the most fertiliser (just under 1 tonne) was utilised in April, followed by a marked decline to zero in
June and July. Fertiliser consumption then increased slightly in the autumn, rising to a total of around
0.7 tonnes before dipping to just below 0.5 tonnes at year end.
Regarding rainfall, this appears to reflect the use of fertiliser, with an early high of 16mm in
February, falling consistently to 4mm in July, August and September. Rainfall then increased steadily
to reach 14mm in December.
In summary, this farm generally employed the most fertiliser at seasons of high rainfall, and by
contrast it produced the most fruit when both rainfall and fertiliser use were around their lowest.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, so, then, well, while, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79411764706 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86262758287 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53781512605 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.040843997 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0833333333 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259868454333 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091020521671 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750173388769 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16706550307 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679921475604 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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