The following graph and pie chart shows the sales of a company in the first and the second quarter of the year.
The given graph and pie charts reveal the information about the sales staus of the first six months of the year by the company. The data is calebroted in per centum which is clear and coherent representated.
In the first glance, there the others and toys sales show the 20% and 5%. Apart from this, the slaes of clothes and food are remain constant in the first quarter of the year. Furthermore, the sales of computer and electrical have been stand for 10% and 15% respectively.
In the second glance, the pie chart shows the information relate to sale of second quarter of the year. The slaes of electrical has been decreasing in the second quarter as compare to first quarter at 5%. As well as, in this quarter the sales or computers and cloths are remain equal at 10% in both sections. Moreover, the sales of foods and toys by the company in second quarter is 20% and 30% respectively.
Overall, it is evident that in the first quarter of the year the sales of toys are least but it increased in the second quarter of the year. The sales of neither cloth nor food have been increased in second quarter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...this, the slaes of clothes and food are remain constant in the first quarter of the ye...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...r the sales or computers and cloths are remain equal at 10% in both sections. Moreover...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, moreover, second, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52475247525 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42537883715 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450495049505 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.5739749634 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0909090909 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533118975799 0.215688989381 247% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213593300647 0.103423049105 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142718486549 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324102604365 0.15604864568 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971948456993 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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