The given diagram give information about process of getting driving licence

Essay topics:

The given diagram give information about process of getting driving licence.

The given picture illustrates the Information about steps involved inprocess of obtaining licence.

Overall, it is clear that it is complex process which includes various steps. It can be seen that process begins at visiting licence Centre and ends at obtaining driving license and eye test is basic requirement.

To begin with, the person has to visit license Centre and complete the application form. Taking eye test is important requirement for getting licence. In case of failure in eye test, person can not take written test. A person who has passed the eye test pay fee for written test.

Probing further, if the person fails the written test, he can take written test three times in same fees. However, after that he has to pay fees again. By clearing else test, he become able to take driving test and finally get licence for driving. If the person failed to clear the driving test, he has to pay fees for retaking test.

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Average: 7.6 (127 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The given picture illustrates the Information about steps...
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...mes in same fees. However, after that he has to pay fees again. By clearing else ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, as to, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82608695652 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33267648344 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.849043157 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.6363636364 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134107217636 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628687995251 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793028899086 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116635746058 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912546195587 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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