The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa.
The line graph and the bar chart is illustrated on the same chart, where the line represents the changes in temperature and the bars represent the average rainfall over a period of twelves months. Overall as the temperature increase, the average rainfall increases. The highest rainfall is between March to May and the lowest rainfall is between Jun and July. It is observed that the rainfall and temperature fluctuates over the year.
From January to March, the temperature increases steadily from 21 to 25 degrees, reaching a peak in April at 26 degrees. The temperature then decreases over the next five months reaching a nadir in August at 18 degrees. The temperature then rapidly increases over the next couple of months, reaching 24 degrees in October and then plummets to 17 degrees in December.
On the other hand, the rainfall is below 50 millimeters in the months of January, February, June, July, August, September and December. From Mar until May, the rainfall increases to a peak and then falls back. The highest rainfall is in April at 275 millimeters. During October and November, the rainfall remains steady at slightly more than 150 mm. Overall, the rainfall is quite regular for six months of the year and for the other months, the amount of precipitation is uncertain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ching a peak in April at 26 degrees. The temperature then decreases over the next...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99074074074 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73145009398 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509259259259 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.323709981 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276263522307 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102716787674 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700602955961 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180036972743 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955999695099 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.