The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates, information of water usage in three different sectors such as, agriculture, industrial and domestic use globally between 1900 to 2000. While, table depicts, the consumption of water in Brazil and Congo. In general, usage of water for agriculture was the highest among other given sectors. In addition Brazil consuming more water than democratic republic of congo.
Initially, water usage for agriculture was began at 500 km3 in 1900 which was dramatically increased to 3000 km3 by the end of period. Whereas, industrial and domestic use was remained steadily with less than 100 km3 up to 1940. After that industrial usage was climbed up slowly to roughly around 400 km3 by 1980, then which is rapidly escalated to more than 1000 km3 in 2000. Moreover, domestic use was the least water consumption area with lower than 100 km3 up to 1980 which rose slightly to 200 km3 by 2000.
Likewise, most significant water consumption country was Brazil with 176 million population and 26,500 km2 irrigated land. The average use of water per person was 359m2 which is considerably highest as compared to congo with mere 8 m3. Furthermore, Congo has only 100 km2 irrigated land with 5.2 million population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...water usage for agriculture was began at 500 km3 in 1900 which was dramatically i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, in addition, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07920792079 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71745655718 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8102698345 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2727272727 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14976630702 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723419820001 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574366990488 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119264754483 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748972905542 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.