The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water

Essay topics:

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water

The charts illustrate the alterations and differences in the number 3 sectors of global water use: Agriculture, industrial and domestic used over the period from 1990 to 2000; and water usage in Brazil and Congo in 2000.
It is clear that global water consumptions significantly increased between 1990 and 2000, and that agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of water used. The research also documented that water consumption in Brazil was considerably higher than in Congo.
In 1990, the water usage in agriculture worldwide stood at around 500 km, while the figures for industrial and domestic water consumption just about one-fifth of that amount. By 2000, global water use had rapidly and dramatically risen to 3000 km, the industrial water use had increased just about haft of that amount and domestic consumption had reached to the peak at 500 km.
In 2000, the population of Brazil was 176 million, takes 32 times as many as Congo’s water consumption. While the water consumption per person in Brazil was 359 km, takes 44 times as many as Congo’s. This might due to the fact that Congo had 265 times lesser irrigated land.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08421052632 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85220427951 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.514849302 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2689010488 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130848045193 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709654034914 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176301022965 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622067061827 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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