The graph and table demonstrate the normal temperatures per month and the mean number of yearly hours of sun’s rays for each year in three big cities (London, New York and Sydney).
Overall, it can be seen that the highest temperature is New York, while Sydney accounts for the lowest degree in July than others.
London’s temperature starts at just under 5 degrees in January. Then this figure rises steadily to reach a peak of about 30 degrees in July, before falling significantly to 5 degrees in final month.
London and Sydney’s temperature do not change much in the first 2 months (almost 10 and just over 25 degrees, respectively). But then the temperature of London alters considerably compared to Sydney. London’s maximum point in July rises to nearly 25 degrees and drops to the bottom of 10 degrees in December. Sydney’s graph falls down slightly in July to marginally above 15 degrees and then uplift slowly to nearly its previous level about 25 degrees in last month.
And again the table provides information on the annual hours of the 3 large cities. The highest number of hours belongs to New York 2 535 and the second place is Sydney’s with 2 473 hours, little less than New York’s and the least twelve-monthly hours belong to London 1 180.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85388127854 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64884266525 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6850092959 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18690251675 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807297563635 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960442673992 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123492140562 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121031450087 0.0819641961636 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.