The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...eratures in London, New York and Sydney, the table illustrates annual hours of s...
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Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... York and Sydney, the table illustrates annual hours of sunshine for these citie...
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Suggestion: However,
...at the beginning and end of the peripd. However London and New York showed a significan...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...n decreasing and showed the lowest point nearly 5 degrees at the end of tge perio...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...rly 5 degrees at the end of tge period. Furthermore London rose significantly and showed ne...
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Suggestion: Finally,
...ificantly and showed nearly 25 degrees. Finally London experienced a downward trend, ca...
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... New York, with a number of 2535. On the second place came Sydney, with 2473 hour...
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Line 6, column 83, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
... London considered to be with more than less hours of sun, with 1180 hours.
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Line 6, column 83, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... London considered to be with more than less hours of sun, with 1180 hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, second

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7397260274 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65221737429 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48401826484 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5877152263 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1428571429 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0903105455829 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373951430093 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373826784773 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618992075505 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445151006571 0.0819641961636 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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