The line graph and table compares three basic cities the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year.
It is clear that the average number of Sydney remain steady in December and February. In July this amount fell significantly. The monthly temperatures stay constant in May and September. Overall, notwithstanding the New York's feature was the lowest pointing at the beginning at about 4°, it rocket to 30° coming to middle of July. Looking at the details, the hours of sunshine go down steeply between August and November. However, at the end of the year fall rapidly from 10 to 5.
On the other hand, the hours of sunshine began to grow enormously from 9 to 22 at the beginning of the year in London. Nevertheless, the hours of sunshine did not reach a peak rather than other cities. Between July and August the temperature maintain a bit same level. Looking at the end of the year hours of sunshine reduce significantly from 21 to 9. Moreover, the table presents information about anniversary hours of sunshine for three cities. New York and Sydney's results were almost alike at 2,500, while the London's sequence was at 1,180.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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.... The monthly temperatures stay constant in May and September. Overall, notwithst...
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...inting at the beginning at about 4°, it rocket to 30° coming to middle of July. Lookin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85572139303 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70266963535 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7979388509 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0769230769 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348412359006 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125089446078 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179116169016 0.0843802449381 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344223268223 0.15604864568 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.263840690701 0.0819641961636 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.