The graph and table below show the average monthly temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sunshine per year in three cities-London,New York and Sydney. Overall,the temperatu...
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...ies-London,New York and Sydney. Overall,the temperature pattern in Sydney was diffe...
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...erature pattern in Sydney was different than that of London and New York. Sydney had...
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...inning of the year which was above 25°C.New York experienced the lowest temperature...
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Suggestion: At
... lowest temperature which was below 5°C.At that time,the temperature in London was...
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...erature which was below 5°C.At that time,the temperature in London was slightly high...
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...tly higher than in New York around 10°C.After that,New York hit the peak point of bel...
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... than in New York around 10°C.After that,New York hit the peak point of below 30°C.L...
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...w York hit the peak point of below 30°C.London experienced the same trend during this ...
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Suggestion: Sydney
...enced the same trend during this period.Sydney experienced an increasing trend for tem...
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...of 25°C in December. Based on the table,New York had the highest annual sunshine wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47887323944 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97306562699 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.848653166 43.030603864 365% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.5 112.824112599 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5 22.9334400587 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235939192132 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187101174522 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.220285863732 0.0843802449381 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235673118732 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.234794042993 0.0819641961636 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.2329268293 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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