The graph below gives information about internet users in thee countries between 1999 and 2009

Essay topics:

The graph below gives information about internet users in thee countries between 1999 and 2009

The given line chart provides information about the proportion of internet users in three nations in Latin America in a decade from 1999 to 2009.

Overall, there was an upward trend in the percentage of internet users in all countries. Additionally, the number of Canada’s internet users increased rapidly during the period shown.

The USA was observed as the highest number of internet users in the first initial year, it commenced at approximately 20%. during the first two years (1999 to 2001), the figure doubled and rose slowly to about 50% in 2005. finally, it peaked about 80% in the final year. Although the proportion of Canada internet users stood just below 10% in 1999, it soared by 50% in 2003 and surpassed the USA in 2005. Before rising to the highest figure in the last reported year.

In 1999, under 5% of Mexican utilized the internet, rising to quadrupled in 2005 and ended the period at around 35%.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...d and rose slowly to about 50% in 2005. finally, it peaked about 80% in the final year....
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... in 2003 and surpassed the USA in 2005. Before rising to the highest figure in the las...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83647798742 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53441171704 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3989928358 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274895619997 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106971841976 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708885465075 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164028519487 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668991705547 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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