University should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
To support gender equality, the higher education institution supposed to have a similar number of male and female students in all subjects. this essay disagrees with the statement due to the fact that some of the university subjects are aimed for certain one sex skill.
To have an equal number of men and women in every subject or study program is an illogical act. The logic of this statement is because not all subjects are aimed at both sexes. Midwife subject, for instance, is aimed for a female student since the goal of this study is to educate the students in term of assisting women giving birth. moreover, the presence of male which is not family related in the delivery room is perceived as a taboo by almost society. As a result, the purpose of the study would be meaningful for male students. Moreover, this type of subject is mostly studying female anatomy. If the male student should participate in this type of subject, the learning process would be embarrassing for both male and female students.
Apart from the statement above, I also assume that the student should be given the freedom to choose which subject they intend to attend. If the choice is limited by quota reason it would lead to loose of learning motivation of the students. Consequently, this practice would badly affect a student’s academic performance as well as the aims of the study.
To sum up, I believe that the selection of student participant should be based on subject objective as well as a merit for the students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for instance, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80152671756 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62314835451 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519083969466 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.713239952 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.7692307692 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247547644072 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895604744634 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547684878644 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145627921306 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548562940836 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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