The graph below gives information about total oil use of 4 main consumers from 2009 to 2030.

Essay topics:

The graph below gives information about total oil use of 4 main consumers from 2009 to 2030.

The line graph illustrates the amount of total oil use of 4 main consumers namely between 2009 and 2030.

Overall, the amount of total oil use of the US and Western Europe and Japan decreased while the figures for China and Middle East increased over the period. The amount of total oil consumed by the Us which is likely to be most popular.

To the year 2009, the amount of total oil use of the US was about 10 million. The figures for Western Europe and Japan and China were lower, at around 4 and 2 million respectively. The amount of total oil which consumed by Middle East was lowest, under 2 million.

During the period 2009 to 2030, the amount of total oil use of the US estimated to fall to approximately 4 million. Similarly, the amount of total oil which consumed by Western Europe and Japan is likely to decline to about 2 million. On the other hand, the figures for China and Middle East expected to rise slightly ab about 3.7 and 3.5 respectively.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49152542373 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39218673497 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412429378531 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7211162896 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321380379963 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176036794295 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12551920668 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265437892184 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110354333157 0.0819641961636 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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