The graph below represents the different employment sectors in the USA between 1930 and 2010.
In general, farming, fishing and foresting shows the highest percentage in the beginning year, whereas it drastically decreased and reach to the lest percentage at the end of the period. However, their is slight increased in the rate of technical and industrial sector in last era.
Firstly, from 1930 to 1980 the ratio of technical sector remains constant then the rate had inclined and reached to around 30% at the end of the time. The interest of industrial sector is lowest in the first year then other part . Although, from 1960 the rate drastically went up till the year 2010. Ultimately, in comparison to three had zone other sector had big ration in the year 1930. After that , the percentages declined till 1960 and remain stable through out the year.
Secondly, farming, fishing and foresting shows the big amount of rate at the first year. But the graph depicts the downward trend till the last period. On the other hand , sales and office illustrates some fluctuation till the year 1970 and their is rose in the ratio from the time 1980 to 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85353535354 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47011793981 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.056356455 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3636363636 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10845361415 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518396097438 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824785244979 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108000496529 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114967942309 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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