The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries

The given tabular chart illustrates, the information about the amount of beverage such as tea and coffee which are imported by four various countries namely Canada, US, UK and Germany.
The data is calibrated into tonnes.

After analysing, it is clearly seen that from Canada the amount of tea imported 20,000 tonnes and it was about 20,000 tonnes less than coffee. The amount of coffee was a 20000 tonnes more than tea it was 40, OOO tonnes which imported by the US.

The table chart further collate that the amount of tea and coffee imported from the UK was 80,000 and 30,000 tonnes respectively. The amount of tea which imported by Germany was 40,000 tonnes less than UK. However, the amount of coffee was imported by Germany 20,000 tonnes more as compared to tea in UK.

Overall, it is evident that the highest amount of tea and coffee imported by UK and Germany however, the lowest amount of beverage imported by Canada, US and UK.

Votes
Average: 5.3 (11 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... was a 20000 tonnes more than tea it was 40, OOO tonnes which imported by the US....
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Line 6, column 131, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... 80,000 and 30,000 tonnes respectively. The amount of tea which imported by Germany...
^^^
Line 6, column 280, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... imported by Germany 20,000 tonnes more as compared to tea in UK. Overall, it i...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75151515152 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31111817474 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424242424242 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0770174257 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295135232886 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16864767043 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805865121184 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18138455871 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976201144994 0.0819641961636 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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