The graph below shows average c bon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The graph below shows average cảbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph gives statistic of the average amount of carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere per person in four different coutries from 1967 to 2007. The chart includes the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal.
Overall, the UK and Sweden witnessed a downward trend whereas Italy and Portugal climbed over the given period of time.
From 1967 to 1977, there was a decrease in the data of the United Kingdom of nearly 1 tonne. Meanwhile, that of Sweden grew dramatically and reached a peak at more than 10 tonnes followed by a sharp fall of nearly 4 tonnes in the next 10 years. In the last 20 years of the given period, the amount of CO2 emitted in the UK and Sweden together declined gradually bt approximately 1 tonne.
Moving on to analyse the remaining categories of the kine graph, in the time between 1967 and 1977, the statistic of carbon dioxide emissions in Italy and Portugal recorded a two folds and three folds increase of almost 4 tonnes. However, in the last 10 years of the depicted time, both were illustrated to grow minimally within 1 tonne.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...aly and Portugal climbed over the given period of time. From 1967 to 1977, there was a decrea...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...977, there was a decrease in the data of the United Kingdom of nearly 1 tonne. Me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69312169312 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51169543945 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57671957672 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2478040019 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.875 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231091839333 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095522759438 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652609038241 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135672599582 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721612564374 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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