The line chart illustrates data on the changes in the number of air pollutants from various sources in the UK, over a 16-year period, starting from 1990, measured in million tons.
Overall, it is clear that all categories witnessed overall decreases throughout the observed period, with a notable exception of the transport area. Meanwhile, the total figure and the figure for industry experienced sharp declines compared to other fields, namely transport and households.
More specifically, despite starting at 7 million tons in 1990, the total level of air pollutants significantly dropped by 3 million tons, followed by a gradual decrease to above 3 million tons in 2005. Additionally, while the figure for transportation fluctuated amid the period, it started to slightly fall in the last 3 years, reaching 1 million tons in 2005.
On the other hand, the industry made the greatest contribution to the overall quantity of air pollution, with roughly 5.5 million tons in 1990, falling rapidly between 1993 and 1996 to 3 million tons, before reaching only 2 million tons which were doubled compared to that of transportation in 2005. Meanwhile, the figure for the household field decreased over the research period from under 1 million tons in 1990 to about 0.2 million tons in 2005.
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- Nowadays some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using the computer Do you agree or disagree 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...period, starting from 1990, measured in million tons. Overall, it is clear that all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20574162679 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86955315241 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4273809386 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.428571429 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11381966964 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618489879454 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606580526449 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853498951434 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673128777317 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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