The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

The graph represents the unemployment rates among female workers in the countries that make up of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
Overall, the female unemployment rates decreased in most of UK countries except for Scotland where it had an increasing unemployment rates in females.
In 2013, England had the highest percentage of females who were out of work as it recorded of 6.8% rates, followed by Scotland of 6.1% and the lowest female unemployment rates were wales and Northern Ireland. 5.6% of women in Northern Ireland were unemployed whereas 5.4% of women in Wales were unemployed.
Scotland was the only country which had an increasing unemployment rate and by 2014 had the highest unemployment rate of 6.7%. Comparatively, the rest of countries reduced with the unemployment rates. England decreased its unemployment rate by 0.3%, Wales by 0.4% and the lesser Northern Ireland females were unemployed as their unemployment rates were the lowest of 4.6%.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['whereas', 'except for']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.329545454545 0.268076937826 123% => OK
Verbs: 0.113636363636 0.116061578633 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0738636363636 0.0759168565197 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0113636363636 0.0366838410393 31% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0227272727273 0.0131127313244 173% => OK
Prepositions: 0.170454545455 0.155750635184 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0284090909091 0.0379272487307 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93544952355 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0852272727273 0.0948980150116 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0227272727273 0.00967000014798 235% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 972.0 1161.00487805 84% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.9 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.23076923077 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358974358974 0.337110787985 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294871794872 0.247514529752 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211538461538 0.171178102325 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141025641026 0.112407865282 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93544952355 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49358974359 0.546246751206 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.5877456138 49.3433353143 78% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2857142857 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9718078365 42.9750493124 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.857142857 135.714022679 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 0.689975730869 41% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 51.7728937729 47.7609492067 108% => OK
Elegance: 3.57692307692 2.94281807926 122% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548114568505 0.418131533498 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.217756105158 0.181151798455 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107641024913 0.0850326197045 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.813686605537 0.706616315825 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143992827602 0.157042692854 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.319679258917 0.228904883108 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150269732442 0.108899403657 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.377570176801 0.367819155151 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0769930930001 0.0812612215331 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.411066666129 0.316326947829 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139694855567 0.0921553760075 152% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70731707317 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.14146341463 526% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.16585365854 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 6.0 0.956097560976 628% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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