The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
The bar graph compares the percentage of unemployed among women in the four different parts of the UK. Overall, England, Wales and norther Ireland experienced a downward trend during the period while Scotland’s female jobless level increased over time. In both years, more women were unemployed in England and Scotland while Wales and northern Ireland showed lower percentage of jobless.
As the graph shown, unemployed percentage of female in England was higher than other three countries in 2013 which was 6.8% for England while Whales were accounted for only 5.4% on the same year, the lowest female unemployment rate. However, the following year, both whales and England saw a slight decline to 5.0% and 6.5%, respectively.
Regarding to Scotland, their unemployed percentage stood at 6.1% in 2013 which jumped to 6.7% in 2014 and became the country of highest rate of women unemployed. On the other hand, norther Ireland stood at 5.6% unemployed rate of women. Later, this country experience 1% dropped to reach 4.6% in 2014.
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...ne to 5.0% and 6.5%, respectively. Regarding to Scotland, their unemployed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33532934132 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64220496682 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0312404317 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263175674572 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111425587837 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075506073281 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176256034337 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556998058335 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.