The line graph illustrate changes in average pricing of navigation system and smartphone for a certain country. It shows the pricing in united states dollars for a period of 6 month in 2004 and the whole year 2005 and 2006 as each year is into two halves.
A distinguishing feature is the pricing of navigation system as it fell drastically upon which it rose only once and continue to decline further, whereas smartphone price decrease ,rose again and remained constant until the end of the lastyear of the given period.
It is noticeable as illustrated on the graph that beginning of of the last 6month of 2004 price of navigation system was high which was about 3800 united states dollars, however, in 2005 it was decreased throughout the year.Further, into first half of the year , it rose sharply to about 3500 united states dollars and decline again to almost 2700 united states dollars at the last 6month of the year 2006.
The smartphone price was 3100 last half of 2005 as highlighted on the line graph. It began to fall moving into first half of 2005 and fluctuated again to 3000 united states dollars on the last 6 month of the same year. Moving further into the following year it declined again to 2600 united states dollars and it remained constance till year the end of the year 2006.
To sumup, prices for navigation system decreased drastically and rose only once as it continue to decline, whilst smartphone prices was changing intermittently throughout the given period
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...united states dollars for a period of 6 month in 2004 and the whole year 2005 and 200...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rther, whereas smartphone price decrease ,rose again and remained constant until t...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...illustrated on the graph that beginning of of the last 6month of 2004 price of naviga...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Further
...05 it was decreased throughout the year.Further, into first half of the year , it rose ...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ear.Further, into first half of the year , it rose sharply to about 3500 united st...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'half' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'halves'.
Suggestion: halves
.... The smartphone price was 3100 last half of 2005 as highlighted on the line gra...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtphone price was 3100 last half of 2005 as highlighted on the line graph. It beg...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Moving further into the following year it declined again to 2600 united states ...
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Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... navigation system decreased drastically and rose only once as it continue to dec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85546875 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60268531325 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421875 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.875478926 43.030603864 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.375 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0886718355777 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559996643777 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401044425276 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065396466362 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324336347124 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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