The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The line chart illustrates the figure for travelers who visited Caribbean Island from 2010 to2017.
In general, it is clear that the number of total tourists which includes visitors staying on cruise ships and staying on island had an ascending trend.
At the start of period, the quantity of total travelers was 1 million, in which the number of tourists staying on cruise ships comprised 25% with 0.25 million, another hand, the figure for staying on island was 75% in total. All of tourists visiting Caribbean increased sharply about the quantity from 1 to 3.5 million during 7 years.
Afterwards, the number of visitors staying on cruise ships grew minimally from 0.25 to 0.5 million while there was not a change of the quantity of that on island. After the year 2011, the figure for people staying on cruise ships increased up to 2 million in 2017 after it reduced and hit the lowest point of 0.25 million in the year 2012. Meanwhile, there was a slight rise in that on island, it stabilized at 1,5 million from 2014 to 2017 although the quantity dropped minimally in the year 2016 with 1,25 million.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75647668394 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38228177387 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497409326425 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.7415117365 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1680000243 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10001806536 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505453145216 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128570721392 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423537306263 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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