The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph displays results of a survey led by the Population Division of the United Nations on the Indian and Chinese population growth- in billions- from 2000 and the forecast data until 2050.
At a first glimpse, the grid highlights an overall positive trend for both the two countries until 2030 when the Chinese population is predicted to steadily decreased.
In detail, nonetheless the Indian population accounted for only 1000 billion citizens, marking a gap of 250 million people by the Chinese population, the trend dramatically increases over the frame-period up to 1450 billion in 2030 and is forecast to reach around 1600 billion citizens in 2050.
In contrast, despite its higher number of citizens in 2000, the Chinese population will continue rising esteeming 250 more billion individuals in 2030 when is predicted to invert its trend, steadily decreasing of 1400 billion 20 years later.
In conclusion, we can summarise that both the two trends will follow a fairly similar pattern from 2000 to 2030 when, whereas the Indian population is forecast to continue increasing, China will be witnessing of a slightly fallen in the number of its citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...will continue rising esteeming 250 more billion individuals in 2030 when is predicted t...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sing of 1400 billion 20 years later. In conclusion, we can summarise that both ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, nonetheless, whereas, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21164021164 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78737068689 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566137566138 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7165178026 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 197.0 112.824112599 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8 22.9334400587 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195588100004 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118778164451 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515909261975 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118778164451 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515909261975 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.2329268293 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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