The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the percentages of people aged 65 and over in three countries from 1940 to 20140.
Generally, it can be seen that the proportion of elderly in each country increase between 1940 and 2040, also Japan is expected to see the most dramatic changes in the elderly population ín 2040.
In 1940, around 9% of Americans were aged 65 or over, compared to about 7% of Swedish people and 5% of Japanese people. The population of elderly people in the USA and Swedish rose gradually over the next 50 years, reaching just under 15% in 1990, while the proportion of Japan remained below 5% until the early 2000s.
Looking at the future, a sudden increase in the percentage of the elderly in Japan is expected, with a big jump to 27% in 2040 and also reach a peak at the end of the period. Additionally, the percentages of people aged 65 and over who live in America and Sweden will slightly lower at about 26 % and 23% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
... percentages of people aged 65 and over who live in America and Sweden will slightl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54385964912 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54820348386 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.1174780712 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235773682482 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123773167987 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728817167982 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157337651929 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669444838032 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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