The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries
line-height:normal">The given line graph displays the comparison of statistics of different people’s reasons to move to the capital city, including employment, study, family/friends, and adventure over the period from 2000 to 2015.
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line-height:normal">Overall, initially, the employment line was the most popular; however closer to the end of the graph it met with the study figure.
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line-height:normal">To start with, the trend of employment trend that was the highest at the initial point (60000) increased steadily to nearly 85000 in 2005, which was almost 37000 above the study line in the same year. then, the trend experienced a slow growth to 92000, after which it declined slowly to 87000 in 2015, where it met with the study figure. In comparison to the employment line, the study trend started with 25000, increasing sharply to 48000 in 2005. then, between 2005 and 2010 it was not quite stable as the employment trend, the figure was increased to 55000, after which it jumped significantly to 87000.
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line-height:normal">The line of family and friends cause experienced a slight increase from 11000 to 22000 from 2000 to 2010, then it left stable in 2015. The figure of the adventure reason was almost as stable as the line of family/friends; it was increasing steadily for the whole fifteen-years period from 10000 to 15000.
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- the line chart shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city 73
- the line chart shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city 67
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79723502304 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.14969071786 2.65546596893 194% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52534562212 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6487874976 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.25 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0277172949106 0.215688989381 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0169016395902 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271007002066 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0174908255229 0.15604864568 11% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281707057953 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 11.4140731707 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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