The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries
This diagram demonstrates variations of average life lengths of people according to their attachment to a certain region or country. The age of 65 an over is allocated as the main criterion for determining whether people in that specific country tend to live long. Period of time which is analysed in this graph is the interval between 1940th and 2040th year. Countries in comparison are Japan, Sweden and USA.
At a glance, it is observed that the striking factor being the trend of overall enhancement in proportion. In 1940, only 5% of the population was hexagenarian in Japan. Whereas 7% and 9% proportion of Sweden and America. In following 40 years, dipped was measured up to 3% in population of Japan. Where is the hexagenarian population of the sweden and America was double of the population of Japan with proportion of 9% and 11% respectively. In 2000, Sweden surpass the population of America at the 14% and gradually rises up to 20% in 2010. In 2027, proliferation will be measured in population of Japan and will gradually rise up to 25% from 10%. On other hand, population of Sweden and America will gradually Rises with same proportion up to 25% with the difference of 2% between them.
Eventually, it can be concluded that indicators in all three countries were in the process of sufficient increase throughout the discussed period. Thus, all in all, the number of people aged over 65 has gradually risen, but with different pace and margins in every mentioned country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'Period'.
Suggestion: Period
...hat specific country tend to live long. Period of time which is analysed in this graph is the ...
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Line 2, column 458, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Sweden) must be used with a third-person verb: 'surpasses'.
Suggestion: surpasses
...% and 11% respectively. In 2000, Sweden surpass the population of America at the 14% an...
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Line 2, column 712, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'rise'
Suggestion: Rise
...on of Sweden and America will gradually Rises with same proportion up to 25% with the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 33.7804878049 172% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8814229249 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88202198319 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549407114625 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4450508831 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2142857143 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251142472485 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791601530615 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498016059478 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149803025509 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00673697830497 0.0819641961636 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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