The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational
books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting
and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph compares the sales of three different types of books from 2002 to 2006.
It is evident that the sale of educational books and children’s books showed an upward
trend, but adult fiction lost popularity over the given time period.
In 2002, adult fiction was on top with a sale of 45 million dollars, followed by children’s
books at 33 million dollars and educational books at 25 million dollars. After a few
fluctuations, the sale of adult fiction declined to 30 million dollars by 2006. In contrast,
educational books were the least sold in 2002. After that their sale showed an opposing trend
to that of adult fiction and reached $32 million by 2006.
Sales of Children’s books’ started at $32 million in 2002, but rose rapidly to 42 million dollars
in 2003. From 2003 to 2005 there was a very slight increase in sales, but after 2005, sales grew
considerably and reached an all time high of $56 million.
Overall, children’s books ruled the market after 2003, among the given three categories of
books.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pularity over the given time period. In 2002, adult fiction was on top with a...
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...ion dollars, followed by children's books at 33 million dollars and educatio...
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...ducational books at 25 million dollars. After a few fluctuations, the sale of adul...
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...30 million dollars by 2006. In contrast, educational books were the least sold in...
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...onal books were the least sold in 2002. After that their sale showed an opposing tren...
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... fiction and reached 2 million by 2006. Sales of Children's books' sta...
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...ase in sales, but after 2005, sales grew considerably and reached an all time hig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15168539326 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84121402915 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0718195711 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.888888889 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253179958471 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131624858858 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522465694136 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112977728195 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642213142284 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.