The graph below shows the total birth and deaths in a European nation from 1950 to 2000.
The given polyline graph illustrates the information about birth and mortality rate in a European nation between 1950 and 2000 and also includes a future prediction of next 50 years.
Overall, it is clear that mortality rate remained constant ;however, birth rate fluctuates over the period. It can be seen that, according to estimates the birth Rate will be stable and mortality rate would incline gradually.
To begin with, during 1950, the number of new births stood at more than 70 lakhs;whereas, mortality rate was Slightly less than birth rate. After two decades, birth rate witnessed a dramatic incline and reached at about 10,00,000 births but constant trend can be seen in case of deaths. It is interesting to note that after 1970, birth rate declined significantly and remained at 6 lakh births in following 20 years.
Probing further, there was similar number of births and deaths till 2010 and figure accounted for 7 lakhs. The mortality rate is predicted to be same in next three decades. In contrast, after 2030 it would follow a gradual increase and may reached at 8,00,000 deaths in later two decades. Future forecasts shows that the number of births would remain stable till 2050.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, whereas, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.035 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56210362788 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5873392358 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.7 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189520787618 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081083368493 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650807781616 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131680224374 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747669084609 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.