The graph gives information about how many students graduated in Canada"s university from1992 to 2007
Overall, it is clear that the ninber of student was a significantly increase including males and femals.
At the begining, femals is more higher than males who graduated from 1992 to 1995 approximately 110.000 and 75.000 students repestively. In 1996 the number of femals finished university'course was decreased under 100.000 students as 1992 and was a slightly down and up to 200. Males always under the number of female students graduated from university . It was shown that thể was under 80.000 students from 1992 to 2002.
From 2002, the students of two groups were rapodly increases. Males was reached over 90.000 student in 20006 and females had nearly 50.000 students graduated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...is clear that the ninber of student was a significantly increase including males and femals. At the b...
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Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...d femals. At the begining, femals is more higher than males who graduated from 1992 to 1...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...emale students graduated from university . It was shown that thể was under 80.000 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 582.0 965.302439024 60% => OK
No of words: 111.0 196.424390244 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24324324324 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.24586718041 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79068923898 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630630630631 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 155.7 283.868780488 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8592644199 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1428571429 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 5.23603664747 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109402114623 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671884317201 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409584024785 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761965971317 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219778256987 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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