The graph on the right describes average house prices in Sometown in 2005.

Essay topics:

The graph on the right describes average house prices in Sometown in 2005.

The line graph compares the average cost of houses in Sometown over the last six-month period in 2005. It can be clearly seen that houses on the market cost higher than the sold houses in the entire time.

In July 2005, houses' price on the market recorded 335,000 dollars, the most expensive in the whole period whereas, houses sold were amounting to 300,000 dollars. In the next month, the cost of houses on the market slightly decreased, in contrast houses sold had a minimal increase.

The only month when house prices plunged in both kinds was in September, when houses on the market amounted only to 320,000 dollars. and sold houses reached its lowest value at 290,000 dollars.

The three following months, showed a constantly rise and fall of prices in residences sold and on the market respectively. Sold houses became expensive at about 380,000 dollars while houses on the market's numbers ended up an amount of about 321,000 dollars in December.

Votes
Average: 5.5 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...arket amounted only to 320,000 dollars. and sold houses reached its lowest value at...
^^^
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('constantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('rise') instead of another adjective.
.... The three following months, showed a constantly rise and fall of prices in residences sold a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'markets'' or 'market's'?
Suggestion: markets'; market's
...out 380,000 dollars while houses on the markets numbers ended up an amount of about 321...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94444444444 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32840455335 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0578625332 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.125 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253369840925 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125752852851 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846534350674 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169141380429 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751451685357 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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