the graph shows the oil production capacity in 6 countries between 1990 and 2010.

Essay topics:

the graph shows the oil production capacity in 6 countries between 1990 and 2010.

The bar chart illustrates how many millions of barrels per day oil were produced and their changes in 6 countries throughout a 20-year period from 1990 to 2010.
Overall, It is obvious that there were upward trends in oil production of all 6 nations, particularly the most significant increase can be seen in Saudi Arabia. Another interesting point is that the amount of oil produced was the highest in Saudi Arabia and the lowest in Qatar over the period in question.
In 1990, the amount of oil produced in Saudi Arabia was over 8 millions of barrels per day, the rose steadily, reaching a peak of over 14 millions of barrels per day. By contrast, only a half millions of barrels per day were produced in Qatar in 1990. Despite a marginal increase in 2000, the figure almost remained stable at the end of the period.
The oil production increased slightly in the other countries. In 1990, the figure in Iraq started at about 3 millions of barrels per day compared to around 2 millions of barrels per day in the other three countries. Although the amount of oil produced in the UAE did not see a rise in 2000, the figure peaked at over 4 millions of barrels per day in Iran and at almost 4 millions of barrels per day in Iraq, Kuwait and the UAE.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
...f oil produced in Saudi Arabia was over 8 millions of barrels per day, the rose steadily, rea...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '14 million'.
Suggestion: 14 million
... rose steadily, reaching a peak of over 14 millions of barrels per day. By contrast, only a ha...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
...90, the figure in Iraq started at about 3 millions of barrels per day compared to around 2 mi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
...s of barrels per day compared to around 2 millions of barrels per day in the other three coun...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 317, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '4 million'.
Suggestion: 4 million
...rise in 2000, the figure peaked at over 4 millions of barrels per day in Iran and at almost 4...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '4 million'.
Suggestion: 4 million
...f barrels per day in Iran and at almost 4 millions of barrels per day in Iraq, Kuwait and the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48684210526 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50144233555 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469298245614 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.671641514 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.222222222222 5.23603664747 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12472920126 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713618463181 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551267743526 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979480658421 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430666958547 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.