The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph presents the percentage of people who were aged 65 and above in three different countries namely the USA, Sweden and Japan from 1940 to 2020 and the predicted population in 2040.
Overall, it is clear from the chart that all the three countries moving in an upward trend. It is also interesting to note that Japan will become as the highest populated country, where as it had the least figure in the beginning.
Taking a closer look, in 1940, the highest proportion was shown by the USA at around 9%, at the same time, Sweden showed around 7% of old age population. From 1960, the USA and Sweden experienced a gradual increase to 15% and just under 15% respectively. Then the USA maintained this figure in a plateau, where as Sweden's population shooted up to 20%, a 5% increase within a period of 20 years since 2000. The anticipated old age population for the US and Sweden in 2040 23% and 25% respectively.
Japan had 5% elderly people at the beginning in 1940, which witnessed a reducing pattern and reached around 3% in 1960. Then they maintained it constantly for about 20 years till 1980. From 2000, they gradually increased and reached around 7% in 2020. They projected that the population of old age population will increase sharply to near 27% in 2040.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whereas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67256637168 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60041503462 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548672566372 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.116610986 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264274525804 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925462017052 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104127752817 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172575951594 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110152576758 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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