The first pie chart indicates how energy is consumed by each household in Australia, while the second pie chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions generated by the energy consumption.
From the first chart, it is clear that most energy is used by heating and water heating, accounting for 42% and 30%, respectively. The percentage of other appliances is relevantly low, with only 15%. The remaining proportions of energy consumption are all less than 10%, with 7% from refrigeration,4% from lighting and 2% from cooling.
In the second chart, more than half of the greenhouse gas emissions in Australian household are created by water heating and other appliances, with 32% and 28% respectively. The following causes include heating and refrigeration, occupying similarly 15% and 14%. Lighting and cooling becomes the two ways that emit the least greenhouse gas, which constitute 8% and 3% respectively.
Overall, nearly half of Australian household energy is consumed for heating and water heating is the most significant factor that leads to greenhouse gas emissions in Australia.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, similarly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38372093023 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06617566476 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7124059716 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146942639408 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063309501605 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048398311932 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100204822748 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041530917386 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.