This report derives from the presented graphs delineating the expenditure on three types of musical albums by the British citizens according to their gender and life line.
Generally speaking, the lion share of people in Britain preferred to purchase a pop or rock melodies. Even though, most teenagers and young adults accounted for purchasing pop and rock music albums, classical tunes favored most by the oldest age group.
A glance at the graphs reveal that, rock tunes sales was highest among people aged between 16 to 24 years followed by young adults (25 -34) with 32% and 28% respectively. However, in the case of pop music the numbers are quite similar in both age categories with more or less 30%. Although, 35 to 44 aged citizens tend to buy pop albums more than rock. Despite exhibiting the lowest numbers on each of these types of tunes, they were accounted for the greatest spending on classical albums.
In terms of gender, the sales were always superior among men compared to women. Though, the lay-out for classical was almost the same with below 10%, men spent on rock music was almost double than women.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h age categories with more or less 30%. Although, 35 to 44 aged citizens tend to buy pop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88541666667 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36067959701 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619791666667 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.275931879 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179199361009 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068793618621 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036021865988 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106095664275 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281730944159 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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