The graphs below show the weekly earning of men and women in the euros for the 16-59 age groups as per their education level?

Essay topics:

The graphs below show the weekly earning of men and women in the euros for the 16-59 age groups as per their education level?

The given varticular charts ilastrate the information about the weekly earning by men and women in education level of graduates and below graduates, with age group of 16 to 59, the data is calibrated in the, which is clearly and cohernetly representing.
It can be seen that, in age group of 16 to 19 years no any graduate man, and only below graduate men earning the 100 euros per week, Apart from all this under the age group 20-24 graduate men earn the 225 Eurous per week. however, below graduate men earning the 200 euros per week, so there for in age Group Graduate men earning increase as compare to below graduate men. moreover, graduates men in age group of 30 to 39, 42 49 and 50 to 59 has been 425, 620 and 690 euros respectively.
As far as it is concerned that image group of 16 to 19 year only below graduate women Earning with hundred Euros per week, In addition to this in age group of 25 to 29 years women. graduates women earn the 300 euros per week, and below graduate women earning the 190 euros per week, futhermore below graduate women in age groups of 30-39, 40-40 and 50-59 has been 250, 235 and 250 euros per week respectively.
Overall, it is evident that under the age groups of 25 to 59 men maximum weekly earning as compare to women in graduates and below graduates category.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
... of 16 to 59, the data is calibrated in the, which is clearly and cohernetly represe...
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Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...en that, in age group of 16 to 19 years no any graduate man, and only below gradua...
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Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...uate men earn the 225 Eurous per week. however, below graduate men earning the 200 eur...
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Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Moreover
...rease as compare to below graduate men. moreover, graduates men in age group of 30 to 39...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
... only below graduate women Earning with hundred Euros per week, In addition to this in ...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Graduates
...s in age group of 25 to 29 years women. graduates women earn the 300 euros per week, and ...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'graduates'' or 'graduate's'?
Suggestion: graduates'; graduate's
...compare to women in graduates and below graduates category.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, apart from, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4356846473 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38769190641 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44398340249 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8371037289 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.714285714 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4285714286 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.523728709318 0.215688989381 243% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.316965886062 0.103423049105 306% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650971373304 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.369988838515 0.15604864568 237% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550733842881 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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