Hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups

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Hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups

Submitted by malina on Thu, 03/28/2019 - 02:55

The graphs illustrate the average of weekly work hours which spent by different occupation and the <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">level of work-stress issues</span> associated with type of profession.

It is evident that despite businessmen work far more hours per week (approximately 70), there is not significantly affect the health of this group (just 11 %), while lecturers spend considerably less hours on work, only 25, however the percentage of this employees suffering from stress has a quarter of all professions.

As can be seen in the graphs both movie producers and doctors spend time on job more than 10 hours weekly and the percentages of illness from work this groups account for 15 and 18 percent respectively. Likewise, programmers, lawyers and writers work equal hours per week, approximately 40, however this type of workers have the lowest level of work-stress issues among other occupation, 5 % and 8 % respectively.

Regarding a professional cookers, the figure for this group of employees make up a mere 10 per cent of the people with stress-related problems total and work only 30 hours weekly.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...1 %, while lecturers spend considerably less hours on work, only 25, however the percentag...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...1 %, while lecturers spend considerably less hours on work, only 25, however the per...
^^^^
Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'cooker'?
Suggestion: cooker
...pectively. Regarding a professional cookers, the figure for this group of employees...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41807909605 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50693756875 2.65546596893 132% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672316384181 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5184174821 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 191.8 112.824112599 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4 22.9334400587 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352203610508 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198995852936 0.103423049105 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437620405039 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222734985248 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140865366168 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.2329268293 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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