The illustration shows information about how an igloo is built from snow

Essay topics:

The illustration shows information about how an igloo is built from snow.

The diagram illustrates the instruction of buildings an igloo from the snow.

Overall, there are five main stages in this process, starting with finding an area covered by hard-packed snow and ending with covering the entrance hole with snow blocks.

Firstly, after a hard-packed snow place is found. People use the saw snow to cut large snow blocks which have the ideal measures are 3, 8 and 15 inches for each dimension and they are used for the foundation of the igloo. The edges of the blocks are adjusted with the saw to fit each other and are set in a ring from bottom to up. Next, using a shovel to dig a hole under the wall to create an entrance, and a slightly oversized block is exactly sculptured and put on the top of the igloo.

Out of the remaining steps, overhangs of snow between the layers of blocks of the outside of the igloo are removed by a shovel and the gaps among them are filled by snow while the internal surface of the igloo is smoothed by hand. Any excess snow is shovelled out if remaining. In the final phase, a hole is dug in the shape of the entrance and it then covered with snow blocks to complete the igloo.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38317757009 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30714331974 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532710280374 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7442668597 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24933250808 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120466953939 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992704062986 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196497628528 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115782896903 0.0819641961636 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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