The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced.
the picture illustrates the production of chocolate.
At the beginning of the cycle, that the cacao trees which contain ripe red pods are cultivated in some countries like South America, Africa or Indonesia. After the harvest of the pods , farmers will collect white cocoa beans inside them.Then beans will be fermented in a tray and spreaded in sun with the purpose of hanging out. When the pods are dried , workers will put them in couple of large sacks and use train or lerry to transport to factory.When arrived , beans have to be roasted in high temperature from 300 to 350 c .After that stages, beans are going to be crushed by a machine and outer shell is removed.Entering the final stage,interior part in beans will be pressed in order to produce liquid chocolate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 638.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7969924812 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77298510035 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676691729323 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.577526488 43.030603864 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.5 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.25 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0175273747536 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288038858445 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498897937381 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057607771689 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057607771689 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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