The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make the comparision where relevant.

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The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make the comparision where relevant.

The picture illustrates the process of producing liquid chocolate for being used daily. It is clear that there are 10 distinct stages in the process, from the growth of the cacao tree to the product of chocolate. The report will discuss the stages in the process.
At the beginning of the process, the cacao trees are mainly planted in S. America, Africa and Indonesia for being taken ripe red pods. In the next stage, the pods are harvested before the white cocoa are removed carefully outside from them. After removing, beans are fermented and spread for a while in the sun to dry completely. At the following stage, they are put in the large pack cautiously to be transported by train or lorry to factory. At the factory, beans are roasted in 350o C and then crushed sufficiently which makes outer shell be removed. In the final stage, inner part is pressed to produce liquid chocolate.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 536, Rule ID: HELL[3]
Message: Did you mean 'she'll'?
Suggestion: she'll
... crushed sufficiently which makes outer shell be removed. In the final stage, inner p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72435897436 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46363258946 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.7 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0550798832225 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240988174578 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320218229972 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050019206867 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224154386998 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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